The following sentences are taken from the letters to the 10-th grade level of

Date: 2015-10-07; view: 410.

Suggested short words.

Replace highlighted long phrases in the following sentences with the

Rewrite the following sentences making them more concrete.

1. We have found that young men are best for this job.

2. She makes good grades.

3. Tom lost a fortune in Las Vegas.

4. If we do not receive the goods soon, we will cancel.

7. Profits last year were excellent.

8. Some years ago we made good money.

9. Here is the product with very little make-up.

10. We will need some new equipment soon.

1. The decision was predicted on the assumption that abundance of

monetary fund was forthcoming.

2. They acceded to the proposition to terminate business.

3. During the preceding year the company operated at the financial deficit.

4. Prior the accelerating production operation, the supervisor inspected the

machinery.

5. Definitive action was effected subsequent to the reporting date.

6. This antiquated merchandising strategy is ineffectual in contemporary

business operations.

7. The unanimity of current forecasts is not incontrovertible evidence of an

impeding business acceleration.

agreed to quit, was taken after, will not work, proof, last year, will get better,

was based on, speeding up production, would be more money, agreement,

before , old, today's , lost money, final, belief.